Bragging

Bragging

A few months ago some authors auctioned of their critique services to raise money for a friend’s medical bills. I jumped at the chance to have one of my fave authors look at my work, even though I had nothing to show her at the time.

Well, a week or so ago I finally emailed Angela Knight my completed novella, THE DEVIL INSIDE, to read. I love Angela’s books. Her Mercanaries series first got me hooked, and I’ve enjoyed the Mageverse stories. But Jane’s Warlord is still my favorite. I can’t wait until Warfem is released. She’s an author that I think writes fantastic hot and sexy love stories, so her opinion is valued.

I just finished going through the cirtique she sent back, and SHE LIKED IT!!! :hehe: :laugh: :hehe:

In her email she said, and I quote, “The writing is strong, the characterization is well-drawn and likeableβ€” particularly Gina β€” and the sex is very well done.” πŸ˜€

And although it was very obvious I still need to work on my grammar skills, (damn those comma’s!:angry: ) and sentence structures, the manuscript also contained comments like …“This is HOT.” and “By the way, you’re doing a really good job of building the conflict. Very skillful here.”

:hehe: :laugh: :hehe: :laugh: :hehe:

Yes, I am dancing around like an idiot!!

18 Comments

  1. Sasha

    Thanks!!

    I am still very happy with it. I’m going to take her notes and polish that baby up!! Add another sex scene. πŸ˜€ and sell it so you all can tell me what YOU think. πŸ˜‰

  2. That’s fabulous! Congratulations and you keep dancing sweetie, you deserve it πŸ˜‰ Angela’s such a terrific writer (and a lovely person too) to get her positive words on your work is bound to feel fantastic! Lifting my glass to all your recent successes!

  3. HelenKay

    Sasha – That is amazing! Angela Knight is a terrific writer. Having her give such high praise to your work must be a huge thrill. I’m so excited for you πŸ˜€

  4. That is a Kick-Ass Crit Sasha!
    – Don’t worry about the commas, that’s what editors are for. The hard part is STORY, CHARACTER & SEX. If you got those – and Angela said you did – then you got the biggies, the stuff an editor CAN’T fix!

    Just so you know, if something had been wrong AK WOULD have said something. (Guess how I found out? *still smarting too*)

    You did GOOD chick! Have a fruity boozer and smile!

    Morgan Hawke

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